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Up to you I offer this burning prayer.
Let it be heard in the highest skies.

You were my angel,
You destroyed me.
And now I pray for the power to kill you.

Listen now to my screams of rage.
Listen well to the rage I feel.

You were my angel,
You left me alone.
And I will hate you forever.

My death will not be release.
I will hunt you until time ends.

And the day when you die
I shall smile again.
For your blood shall run
Over my hands.
A poem for my story. What do you think? Is the anger potent enough?
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dr7key Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
WOW! it expresses anger perfectly ... still, if you want that we collaborate on hatred and anger theme in a poem, I might go for it! that's quite good!
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EnyaStillblood Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010
Hmmm... an interesting offer. What would the poem be about?
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dr7key Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010
Hatred itself [ devastation] check this poem ... and let's see if we can mix the two poems with some editing [link] ; otherwise we can work a theme together :)
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EnyaStillblood Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010
Sure! Let's try it!
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dr7key Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010
Yes, sure!
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EnyaStillblood Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2010
I sent you my email!
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dr7key Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2010
I got it thanks ^^
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